Planning My Screenplay

Story Board
I am going to create my story board for the first scene in my script, up to the beginning of the animation. This is for the practical reason that this is the only scene in a non-supernatural setting so will be easier to set up, as well as the fact that this is the scene that I have the most creative ideas in terms of camera and editing. I am cutting the scene off at the animation, as it would be very difficult for me to access the resources I need to create both the animation, and the props for this part of the scene (i.e. a projector and white screen).

Location
I am going to use a room in my house to set up the one location needed for my introductory sequence. I planned to use this location specifically because I knew it would be accessible to me. The scene will feature a doctor's surgery, that can be set up with a single piece of furniture (a chair) set up in front of a white wall, and the only other props I will need would include things like a speaker and some wires, which I can easily access.

Cast
My script features only one character, potentially two if I decide to keep the Doctor onscreen. I am going to use my sister to play Maddie in the storyboard, as they are the same age. If I want to feature the doctor onscreen, I will probably use my dad to play this role, as again he is the roughly same age as the character.

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