Response to 'The Fly' by Olly Williams

In 2014, Olly Williams released ‘The Fly’, a short film following a getaway driver waiting outside a bank robbery for his accomplices. We watch for six minutes as the protagonist becomes progressively more stressed as he sits in the getaway car, with his actions eventually resulting in the police arriving at the scene as his accomplices leave the bank.

The tone of this piece is dark comedy, which paired with a gritty and realistic setting acting, and excellent comedic timing makes for a hilarious if slightly uncomfortable viewing experience.
The creative use of camera angles, including an extreme close-up of the protagonist's eyes, and a bird's eye view shot of the car, keeps the viewer interested in the action and and sticks to the typical snappy editing of a comedy, potentially inspired by directors such as Edgar Wright (Baby Driver, Shaun of the Dead).
Williams also uses purely diegetic sound, adding to the realistic tone of this short and therefore drawing the viewer further into the action, adding to the 'dark' of the comedy by building tension throughout the sequence
Overall, I feel that this short film was successful in what it set out to do, and is an interesting piece to contrast with 'Blue Song' which I have previously analysed and 'Baby Driver', another 'getaway driver' piece.

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Response to 'The Arrival' by Daniel Montanarini

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Building Character in Screenplays

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